Monday, September 14, 2009
Jared Diamond's thesis
I agree with Jared Diamond's thesis. I agree with it because i too believe in geographical luck. geographical luck is very important. having a good geographical area for you civilization is important because in order to have a good civilization you need a good climate, available food, and you need to be near a water source.
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This is good but there is no evidence to back up your theory or opinion. You do not say what geographical luck is and how it gives it. Just give a better explanation and evidence of what you are trying to say and a little bit better of a topic sentence. The good parts were that all your points were right just elaborate a bit more
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